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Post by Critters on Jan 14, 2011 0:50:47 GMT -5
one fall day in oragan there was a small boy an man and his wife. and in all their years they had never seen a metior shower. so 1 night the house started shaking.the man named frank came out side with an elephant gun anseen a ufo.frank didnt know what to do so he ran in th houseand gamve his family wepons. when a ufo crashed through the garage."o crap" said frank their coming in on us.frank went and touched it. and a door opened. "whos there " said frank. my names charlie" said the man "what charlie no no no it cant be true those story were fro 50 years ago. no its impossable." "sorry freind but im here and i cant help it there back."" what do you mean their back"" i mean the critters a re back they folled me. there must be athousand of em by now."" how do i know your not liesing" does this look like im kidding " pointing at his face."no"well" frank went to see if he had another gun.and he came backwith a 44 but charlie said"ooo frank i dont need thet i got my own" pulling out his cannon from the wreckage.well i say we might as well get started. oo no we need my ship oo no help me .can you help me fix it." "yes iv got tolls in the closet." "ok"we will defeat them."" hey hey hey how can i. iv got o get the keys out of th car." "CRap" charlie now mounting his cannon out the window. "we have a plying car so just fly it on top of his pile of junk" we have to go said chralie their taking ovrshoothingg out he window
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Post by Critters on Jan 14, 2011 0:51:13 GMT -5
i will put more on tomarro
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Post by Critterbuster on Jan 14, 2011 0:54:15 GMT -5
I would really like to see that be made.....it would actualy be perfect to set up a Critters Tv Series.
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Post by Critters on Jan 14, 2011 12:37:10 GMT -5
i would be great to bemade for a 2 part sequel
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Post by Critters on Jan 14, 2011 12:44:16 GMT -5
hey crittersbusters you proboly remember me from the tremors under ground site... my name was critters
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Post by Critterbuster on Jan 14, 2011 15:38:58 GMT -5
hey crittersbusters you proboly remember me from the tremors under ground site... my name was critters Yes I Do Remember you, Thanks for joing my Forum Hope you are enjoying it
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Post by Critters on Jan 16, 2011 17:13:28 GMT -5
ido enjoy it
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Post by KamikazePyro on Jan 17, 2011 20:17:31 GMT -5
It's a good concept but it's happening way, way, way too fast. It's going from one thing to the next without any buildup or development.
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Post by Critters on Jan 18, 2011 16:02:23 GMT -5
i know i dont want to write an novel on the internet... id make an acual movie first
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Post by Critters on Jan 22, 2011 15:16:57 GMT -5
hey i just noticed somthing im an critters egg
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Post by Critterbuster on Jan 22, 2011 15:46:55 GMT -5
congratulations. that for having over 50 posts.
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Post by Critters on Jan 24, 2011 15:50:27 GMT -5
thank you
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